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建筑专业攻读硕士德PS范文

PERSONAL STATEMENT

This document is being submitted in support of my application for admission into your program.

Born in June 1974, I grew up in Lanzhou, a city that boasts of a history of thousands of years and a cultural heritage that is as colorful as it is old. Few cities, either in China or beyond, can match it in the richness of architectural styles. Stradding the upper Yellow River that sired the Chinese civilization, Lanzhou prides itself in both her past glory laden in the ancient structures on the north bank and her new found prosperity oozing out of the dazzling high-rises in the south. Although, as a child, I was not always able to articulate my admiration for such striking contrast, I constantly beheld the city's landscape in awe. I began to understand, at that young age, that architecture can be a powerful symbol of culture, a people and the spirit of an era.

My first intellectual mentor, one of my parents' best friends, was an artist seasoned in oil painting and photography. She often brought me with her when she traveled, and it was on these trips that her creative mind worked in full gear. I thus observed how human hands could work wonders by recreating the beauty of natural scenery in the form of sketches, paintings and photos. What was more important, I got to know that there are professions of creative work that calls for imagination and craftsmanship.

Fervent with creative art and fascinated with architectural design, I entered in 1992 into the Department of Architecture of Tsinghua University, China's top engineering school, on the strength of my outstanding performance in the highly competitive National University Entrance Examinations.

At Tsinghua, I went through five years of vigorous training and thus acquired exquisite skills in drawing and design. Since I understood from early childhood that inspiration often comes from nature, I traveled far and wide throughout China's vast territory, setting my foot even in outlying Tibet and Xingjiang, both in the country's westernmost interior. These travels allowed me to trace modern China's culture to its different sources, and the variety not only deeply impressed me but also fired my imagination. In my graduation project, Cashi Contemporary Art Museum in Xinjiang, I successfully blended a natural environment into my artistic design by using a system of water circulation to support and sustain the building. As the most significant resource in an agricultural enclave surrounded by desert, water represents hope for both the people and their land. With the water circulation system, the building took on added vitality.

In mid-1997, I graduated with my B. S. and took a job as a designer with the Beijing-based "company." My career as an architect thus took off.

Once I have settled into the real world of architectural design, I developed my career path quickly, playing substantial roles in a stream of projects. To date, my most significant responsibility has been to work as a main designer in (a key state) project, in which I led a group of my colleagues in meeting a daunting challenge. In addition to gaining a profound understanding of the technical difficulties necessarily attendant to such large-scale projects, I learned to work effectively within a team that also included my clients and colleagues. The teamwork thus not only strengthened my professional competence at conceptual and technical design but also honed my leadership skills that can be put to good use in other situations. As a result, I now feel even more confident of myself than I was before.

My experience in general, and the six years of frequent traveling in particular, has left an indelible mark on my intellectual development. As I can now readily appreciate a society's cultural, historical and socio-political impact on its architectural styles, I now try to reflect my own cultural and social background in my own designs. These days, I view architecture not just as a career but, more importantly, as an expression of my professional progress, and I fell that it is an view more compatible with Western rather than Chinese pedagogy. In any case, I have already been through China's best school for architectural studies, and I am convince that the further development of my professional qualifications requires more advanced training in a school like yours. I believe that advanced studies under your seasoned guidance will endow me with a broader vision and more profound insights, with which I can make still more contribution to my motherland China.



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个人简历样本



Keng-hui Lin

P.O.Box 23-166, Lab. 326,

Taipei, Taiwan

(8862)3668252

khlin@gate.sinica.edu.tw

Education

National Taiwan University

Taipei, Taiwan

Oct. 1991 - June 1995

Bachelor of Science in Physics, June 1995.

Culmulative GPA 3.7, graduated ranked top 10%

Dr. C. C. Samuel Ting's Scholarship for

Outstanding Students in physics - award yearly

to two outstanding physics students nationalwide

through a rigorous oral exam conducted by

Dr. T.-Y. Wu, ex-president of Academia Sinica

The Ministry of Education Scholarship for Gifted

Senior High School Students Studying Mathematics

and Natural Sciences

St. Dominic High School

Kaohsiung, Taiwan

Sep. 1989 - Jun. 1991

Graduated one year early to enter National Taiwan

University, June 1991

Participant in the Developed Program for Kaohsiung

area High School Students with Mathematical Talent

at National Sun Yat-sen University

Work experience

Institute of Atomic and Molecular Sciences, Academia

Sinica

Taipei, Taiwan

Aug. 1995 - Current

Research Assistant in the Surface Science group

Supervisor: Dr. Jiing-Chyuan Lin

Duty: Set up the diamond film growth kinetics

experiments & Computer network administration

Skills: AutoCAD design, UHV(Ultrahigh Vacuum) technique,

hand-on operation of LEED, quadrupole mass spectrum, TPD(Temperature Programmed Desorption), Novell network.

The Physical Society of the Republic of China

Taiwan

July 1995 - Current

System Adminstrator, maintain a bulletin board system

and WWW server running on Linux

Foundation for Scholarly Exchange (Fulbright Foundation)

Oct. 1995 - Current

Member of Volunteer corps

Research and compiled information to construct a database

on graduate studies.

National Taiwan University

Sep. 1994 - June 1995

Teaching Assistant, Part-time

Core courses: A Journey to Subatomic World & From Quarks

to Black Holes

Prof. W.Y. Pauchy Huang

Research Insterests and Activities

Condensed Matter Physics

The 2nd IUPAP Topical Conference and the 3rd Taipei

International Symposium on Statistical Physics: Nonlinear

and Random Process, Academia Sinica

July 1995

The 2nd International Summer School on Astronomy: Star

Formation, National Central Univ.

July 1995

May 1995

The 3rd International Spring School on Nuclear Physics

May 1994

The 1st International Symposium on Symmetries in Subatomic

Physics

The 2nd Taipei International Symposium on Statistical

Physics: Monte Carlo Simulation

July 1994

Term Project -- 1-Dimensional Euler Equation -- Shock Wave

Problem

June 1995

Summer Research Project -- Simulation of the Magnetic Zigzag

Domain Wall as a Self-organized Critical System, sponsored by National Science Council

Dec. 1994

Term project -- 2-D Ising Model Simulation

Jan. 1994

Extracurricular activities and Membership

Chief Editor of the NTU Physics Department student journal,

Space-Time

Associate Chairman, Physics Student Association

Second Violinist, National Taiwan University Symphony

Orchestra

Member of the Science Monthly Foundation

Member of Foresight Institute

Computer Skill

Languages: BASIC, FORTRAN, C/C++, HTML, LATEX

Packages: Mathematica, Matlab, AutoCAD, MS-Word, Excel

Systems: DOS, MS-Windows, UNIX, Linux

Personal Data

Sex: Female Birthdate: 12/12/74

Birthplace: Kaohsiung, Taiwan Country of Citizenship:

Taiwan

References

Dr. Jiing-Chyuan Lin

Inst. of Atomic and Molecular Sciences, Academia Sinica,

Taipei Taiwan

jclin@po.iams.sinica.edu.tw

Prof. Wun-Shian Fann

Inst. of Atomic and Molecular Sciences, Academia Sinica,

Taipei, Taiwan

fann@gate.sinica.edu.tw

Prof. Shin-nan Yang

Dept. of Physics, National Taiwan University, Taipei,

Taiwan

snyang@phys.ntu.edu.tw



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哭穷样本

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have asked ETS to send my original GRE(XXXX)&TOEFL(XXX) to your departement, please use the photocopies in case the original ones may not arrive in time.

I did not enclose application fee in my package because I am really poor and the fee is much more than my monthly income while I have to support by myself.However, it doesn't mean that I will defer or waive the fee.Actually, I am trying all my best to collect money.Although collecting money will be really hard and time-comsuming,I will send the money as soon as I can!

It is well known that your graduate program is highly competitive and reviewing files will cost you much time.In order to save time, I beg you please review my application materials firstly.

Please do keep in mind that i am applying for your program with all of my energy and with extremely serious attitude.

Yours sincerely,

XXX



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个人陈述

Statement of Purpose

ACADEMIC STATEMENT

Name:

Degree desired: Doctorate

Proposed field of Study: Food Science & Technology

Microbiological food safety has always been a focus of concern for thefood processing industry and the public. Food spoilage microorganisms are responsible for approximately one-fourth of the total amount of food disposed throughout the world (Huss, 1992). Society also pays a huge economic price for the illnesses caused by foodborne pathogens and concomitant decrease of productivity. Thus my major interest is in researching methods for detecting microorganisms in the food system and the means for controlling or eliminating them.

After I received my master's degree and serving two years in the military, I started working as an Associate Food Scientist at the Food Industry Research and Development Institute (FIRDI) in September, 1990. For the first 22 months there I was a lecturer in the Training Unit, where I taught about food processing plants as a part of employee training under the "Food GMP Authorization and Promotion Plan" and the "Promotion of CAS (ChineseAgricultural Standards ) Quality Mark System" .Both are important official systems for ensuring food quality in Taiwan nowadays; nevertheless, they lean toward plant hygienic layout and design, and end-product inspection.

At my request, I transferred to the HACCP Working Group in July, 1992.This one-year on-line microbiological survey and monitor of food processing factories advanced my understanding of environmental stresses on microorganisms and the methods of destroying them. My co-workers and I submitted the proposals "The HACCP System for Production of Frozen Roasted Eel" and "The HACCP System for Production of Ice Bar" in June, 1993.

HACCP is a preventive system of food safety. It is more effective and reasonable than conventional quality assurance programs based on end-production testing. This system has been introduced into Taiwan by FIRDI for over four years. However, the concept of HACCP is still frequently misunderstood or little known, partly because plant management often mistakes it for a "trouble-shooting" system, not a "trouble-preventing" one. Another reason is the complexity of decisions about where the "real" CCPs are located and what the applicable criteria are for preventing a false sense of security.Taiwan is demanding of specialists in this field.

From July, 1993, to the present I have been the Assistant Manager, R&D Division, in Kasei Frozen Foods Works Co., Ltd. Fortunately I could employ my knowledge here in Kasei to achieve an ambitious dream of mine:the "Umbrella of Quality Assurance." This encompassed the hygienic design of the processing equipment and layout of this plant, employee training and hygienic management, cleaning and disinfection procedures, sampling and inspection plans, HACCP system, etc. These broadly describe my research interests.

In order to enhance my research abilities, I have taken courses in SAS (Statistical Analysis System) at Taiwan Institute of Technology. In February,1995, I will attend 90 hours of classes in "Technology of Food Quality Control Program for High-level Management" at China Productivity Center (CPC). In the subsequent months, I am also planning to study books relevant to food microbiology to make up for my lack of formal training. And then, most importantly, I would like to begin intensive study at your graduate school.

If I am admitted, I will apply my effort into achieving the following goals:

(1) To acquire the knowledge of microbiological phenomena in foods.

I plan to take some advanced courses related to food microbiology,including the following topics: microbial ecology, control and elimination methods in food microbiology, food pathogenic bacteriology and foodborne

disease hazards, food toxicology, microbiological deterioration, shelf-life extension, establishment of microbiological criteria, methods of sampling, enumerating, isolating and identifying microorganisms, etc.

(2) To advance my understanding of plant sanitation.

At present, few scholars here are carrying out research on this subject. I strongly desire to gain expertise in hygienic design of food processing equipment, cleaner and sanitizer efficacy, biofilm, waste product handling, etc. If the situation warrants, I may also consider taking HACCP training courses on or off campus.

(3) To improve my abilities with statistics and computer applications.

Because statistical procedures are essential tools in food research, I intend to take courses related to this area at your institute.

Upon the completion of my studies,I will return to Taiwan. I aspire to devoting myself to teaching in colleges or continuing my research work in a research institute where I can serve the food industry more.

Reference

Huss, H.H. (1992) Development and use of the HACCP concept in fish processing. Int'l. J. of Food Microbiology. 15, pp33-44.


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证明材料范例:大学毕业证书
Let it be known that Mr. Wang Chumming, native of Shandong Province, born on January 17, 1962, having specialized in seismological geology in the Geology Department of Changchun University from October, 1978 to July, 1982 and having completed the four year undergraduate program with qualified standing, is hereby awarded this Certificate of Graduation.



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证明材料范例:大学获奖证明



Tsinghua University

NO. 742821 November 22, 1985

TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN:

This is to certify that Miss Liu a senior student in our Department of International Trade College of Law, received four times the Book Coupon Awards, which only students among the top five percent are entitled to.

President



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证明材料范例:国家教委出具的公费留学财力证明



PEOPLE'S REPUBLIC OF CHINA

TO Whom It May Concern:

This is to certify that Mr. Wan Li, born, June 17, 1960, a native of People's Republic of China, graduated from Tsinghua University, and he has been awarded a government scholarship by this commission for studying abroad.

The scholarship is for two academic years. covering his / her living costs, full tuition required by the host university, round trip travelling expenses, as well as other miscellaneous fees.



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证明材料范例:健康证明书



TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN:

This is to certify that Mr. Lin Chonghan is physically and mentally healthy. This statement is based on his health history and a physical checkup. My observation of his health condition is that he is capable of doing extensive hard work, both manually and intellectually.

Sincerely yours,

Dept. Of Internal Medicine

Post Hospital


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证明材料范例:参加学会、社团证明



TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN:

This is to certify that Mr. Liang is a member of IEMC (Institute of Education for Mass Communication) since 1982.

To the best of my knowledge, Mr. liang has been a senior lecturer teaching in the Dept. of Mass Communication, Beijing University since the beginning of 1984. He is also teaching some courses in Joint College.

I would like to mention that Mr. Liang is responsible. aggressive and gets along with his colleagues very well. Hence, he also demonstrates superior scholastic capacity and his potential for further academic growth.

If there is any information regarding this gentleman, please do no hesitate to let me know.

Best Regards.



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要求增加奖学金的信件

Thank you for your email and kind offer! Definitely, I would like to try to apply for a visa for the Winter quarter. I understand that both you and Professor Black have tried very hard to help me with my situation and I appreciate your efforts.

 As it is true that nobody really knows why the visa officers refuse certain applicants and allow others, I have been told by several successful visa re-applicants that re-applying with a new I-20 with a slightly different offer from the US schools would help. For example, a slight increase in financial aid and so on. I don't know whether this is something possible for you to consider for my situation. But I would really appreciate if you could consider some possibilities.

I know that I have given you enough trouble and please ignore my request if it is too difficult for you to do. I will simply try my best to get my visa and come to your school.

Thanks!

Sincerely yours,


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life saver!!!

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哪位高手有完整的作品集,能不能发上来给小弟借鉴借鉴,我一点头绪都没有!谢谢了

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真是位仁兄啊,拱手作揖!!!呵呵。。。


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